Script:
Folau - "He's downstairs when your ready boss."
Pesalili - nods his head
Folau walks out and waits in the elevator with Tim.
Pesalili walks into the elevator with Folau and Tim behind him.
The elevator opens and Pesalili walks out into the underground car park with Folau and Tim following close-ish behind him.
They reach the other man Aminiasi and send directly in front of each other staring straight at each other.
Pesalili - "do you have the goods I ordered ?"
Aminiasi just nods his head and signals to follow him. Aminiasi is followed closely by Pesalilis 2 henchmen/bodyguards, Folau and Tim.
Aminiasi opens the boot of the car and we see a big bag with what looks like a kid/ person inside and they open it up and you see Toby with duck tape and a bandanna on his mouth and ropes around his body.
Folau and Tim grab Toby out of the boot of the car and hand him to Aminiasi who holds a gun to the back of his head as he hands him over to Pesalili.
As he hands him over Pesalili will then hold a gun to his head.
Pesalili - "this isn't what I wanted !!" "But I'll take him anyway"
Pesalili will then hand over the briefcase of money and it will cut to black.
It will then cut to black
Characters:
- Aminiasi = Boss #2
- Toby = Slave guy
- Chene & Deborah = Aminiasi's Henchmen/guards
-Pesalili = Boss #1
- Tim and Folau = Pesalilis Henchmen
Location:
- Mount wellington
- Offices
- Underground car park
- elevator
Logo:
Part1:
For the first part of the logo for our foundation portfolio, I decided to look into objects/animals that strike fear/are scary and that is powerful to give the meaning behind our logo, as our vision for our group because we are doing thrillers was to have a scary-ish logo which comes back to the thriller genre, and the power side of things we wanted to add as we wanted to have a powerful effect on the viewers that are watching. so we ended up choosing a dragon, also the meaning behind the circle is that our group is unified and not just scattered around in a way and also just as a practical thing to make the logo look a bit more complete. so with all these factors in mind, I set off to find a good logo base. From there I found the picture that you see selected on the screen.
With this base, I went on to deselect and remove all the background so that when I put an aftereffect on for the end product it does not show with a black or white background behind. This ended up taking a lot of my time and was the most time-consuming of the process.
My third step was quite simple, where I literally just changed the colors of the ring, and flames around the dragon to a nice darker red and changed the tint of black to a darker shade. these 2 changes added a little bit more of a darker feel to the dragon and the overall logo to again add to the thriller feel.
In the next step, I will add a lightning inferno effect to it when I add it to the movie and add the name underneath it. Also with the lightning inferno effect, it will make it look like the fire is from the dragon and that it appears behind the fire adding a cool effect.
Mood board:
Hi Hunter
ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 15/20
I really like your moodboard although it could have done with some explaining of what sort of look and feel you wanted to achieve and how you planned to do that.
Your logo progression from one phase to the other is done well and your finished product looks great. You have also given a good rationale behind why you made the creative decision you did. Well done.
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The characters and location are a missed opportunity. This needed actual explanation of what sort of characters you were going for, examples of other movies where they were represented like you wanted to, pictures and ideas from other movies. The location needed planning shots showing the under group carpark sort of location and office etc, this could have even been grabbed off Google Images. It just needed to reflect actual planning that went into it so we can track with how you progressed and made your idea happen.